… Etienne first met Evangeline when she was sitting, attentively, on a park bench in the Public Garden, on an otherwise ordinary morning in late summer. It was already past ten, so the bankers and lawyers that shuttled past did so with some purpose, on their way to meetings where something of importance was likely to transpire … He didn’t really meet Evangeline on that first encounter. His eyes met her. Her eyes were focused on the walking path nearest her, and she parceled out her attention equally to each person who approached from either side. She was waiting for someone. She wasn’t anxiously waiting for someone, or impatient, or worried. Just waiting, serenely undisturbed, as if it could take all day … Etienne was on a different walkway, further afield from the one crossing in front of her bench, so she didn’t notice his passing. But he noticed her non-passing. Everyone has a particular taste in the opposite gender, a set of features they find compelling – a vision they find it hard to turn away from. Evangeline hit this bullseye exactly. He couldn’t turn away.
… As he got to now her better, there seemed to be several levels to her personality, and she would glide back and forth between them on a whim. She was thoughtful, then delighted, then serious, then naive and in need of help, then slyly revealing that she had been aware of the situation all along. She confronted each situation directly, saying what was on her mind as it occurred to her. There was no hint of duplicity, no sense that she was acting. You could read her present state of mind from her face, though you often couldn’t predict what would come next. It was both confusing and charming. She drew you in. You wanted to follow her, even though you didn’t know where she was going. For Etienne, she was a mystery worth solving – or not solving. Either would do … She always seemed to know how to get him to abandon his cares, and just live in the moment with her.
But nothing could have prepared him for what would come next …
Forthcoming in August 2026
The novel is finished, but not yet published. In the meantime, it can still be read as a work on progress here.